The maps below show hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it - Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 26/04/2018
Phân tích biểu đồ
Đề bài
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The maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. |
Dạng biểu đồ: Bản đồ hiện tại và tương lai (Map).
Đặc điểm tổng quan: Phía tây đường ray xe lửa không thay đổi nhiều. Trong khi đó, ở phía đông của đường ray xe lửa, hạ tầng giao thông có sự phát triển đáng kể.
Sắp xếp thông tin:
Đoạn 1: Bản đồ hiện tại
- Đường ray xe lửa trải dài theo hướng bắc-nam, chia thành phố thành 2 phần.
- Ở hướng tây bắc, có một sân bay nối liền với đường A2.
- Từ vòng xuyến trên đường A2, có thể đi ngang qua đường ray, đến con đường bao quanh trung tâm thành phố ở phía đông (ring road).
Đoạn 2: Bản đồ dự kiến trong tương lai
- Sân bay sẽ được chuyển thành khu công nghiệp và nối liền với đường ray.
- Nhà ga vẫn nằm ở vị trí giao nhau giữa đường ray và con đường liên kết A2-ring road, nhưng có một vòng xuyến mới đã được dựng lên tại đó.
- Có hai con đường mới dẫn đến trung tâm thành phố: (1) đường A4 ở phía nam, nối liền với đường A2 và (2) đường lớn nối với khu vực ngoài thành phố ở phía đông.
Bài mẫu
The given maps compare the current layout of Hunderstone town and its future plan.
Overall, the western side of the town will almost remain unchanged, while the eastern side will expectedly witness considerable developments in transportation infrastructure.
At present, there is a north-south railway separating the town into two parts. To the southwest of the town, an airfield can be accessed from Road A2 which is parallel to the railway. From the roundabout located midway of A2, citizens can drive across the railway to reach the town centre surrounded by a ring road and a built-up area.
In the future, the airfield is likely to be transformed into an industrial estate which is directly connected to the railway. At the intersection of the railway and the road linking A2 to the ring road, the gas station will stay unchanged, while a new roundabout will be constructed. Noticeably, the town centre will be more easily accessible thanks to the construction of two new roads. The first road will be built in the south of the town and linked to A2, whereas the second one will be built on the east side and extend out of the town.
Phân tích ngữ pháp
Overview
“Overall, the western side of the town will almost remain unchanged, while the eastern side will expectedly witness considerable developments in transportation infrastructure.”
Cấu trúc chi tiết: Trạng từ, chủ ngữ 1 + cụm động từ 1, liên từ + chủ ngữ 2 + cụm động từ 2 + tân ngữ.
Phân tích:
- Trạng từ: Overall
- Chủ ngữ 1: the western side of the town
- Cụm động từ 1: will almost remain unchanged
- Động từ khuyết thiếu: will
- Trạng từ: almost
- Động từ: remain
- Tính từ: unchanged
- Liên từ: while
- Chủ ngữ 2: the eastern side
- Cụm động từ 2: will expectedly witness
- Động từ khuyết thiếu: will
- Trạng từ: expectedly
- Động từ: witness
- Tân ngữ: considerable developments
- Cụm giới từ chỉ nơi chốn: in transportation infrastructure
- Giới từ: in
- Tân ngữ: transportation infrastructure
Body paragraph 1
“To the southwest of the town, an airfield can be accessed from Road A2 which is parallel to the railway.”
Cấu trúc chi tiết: Cụm giới từ chỉ nơi chốn, chủ ngữ + động từ ở thể bị động + cụm giới từ chỉ nơi chốn (giới từ + tân ngữ + mệnh đề quan hệ).
Phân tích:
- Cụm giới từ chỉ nơi chốn: To the southwest of the town
- Giới từ: To
- Tân ngữ: the southwest of the town
- Chủ ngữ: an airfield
- Động từ ở thể bị động: can be accessed
- Động từ khuyết thiếu: can
- Động từ to be: be
- Quá khứ phân từ: accessed
- Cụm giới từ chỉ nơi chốn: from Road A2 which is parallel to the railway
- Giới từ: from
- Tân ngữ: Road A2
- Mệnh đề quan hệ: which is parallel to the railway
- Đại từ quan hệ: which
- Động từ: is
- Bổ ngữ (cụm tính từ): parallel to the railway
Body paragraph 2
“At the intersection of the railway and the road linking A2 to the ring road, the gas station will stay unchanged, while a new roundabout will be constructed.”
Cấu trúc chi tiết: Cụm giới từ chỉ nơi chốn (giới từ + tân ngữ + mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn), chủ ngữ 1 + cụm động từ 1, liên từ + chủ ngữ 2 + cụm động từ 2 (bị động).
Phân tích:
- Cụm giới từ chỉ nơi chốn: At the intersection of the railway and the road linking A2 to the ring road
- Giới từ: At
- Tân ngữ: the intersection of the railway and the road
- Mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn: linking A2 to the ring road
- Hiện tại phân từ: linking (rút gọn cho which links)
- Tân ngữ của động từ: A2
- Giới từ: to
- Tân ngữ của giới từ: ring road
- Chủ ngữ 1: the gas station
- Cụm động từ 1: will stay unchanged
- Động từ khuyết thiếu: will
- Động từ liên kết: stay
- Tính từ: unchanged
- Liên từ: while
- Chủ ngữ 2: a new roundabout
- Cụm động từ 2: will be constructed
- Động từ khuyết thiếu: will
- Động từ to be: be
- Quá khứ phân từ: constructed
Phân tích từ vựng
1. Layout
- Loại từ: danh từ
- Nghĩa tiếng Anh: the arrangement or organization of elements, objects, or components within a specific space or design
- Dịch nghĩa: cách bố trí, sắp xếp
- Ví dụ: The layout of the city greatly impacts the efficiency of transportation systems. (Cách bố trí của thành phố có thể ảnh hưởng lớn đến hiệu quả của hệ thống giao thông.)
2. Considerable development
- Loại từ:
- considerable: tính từ
- development: danh từ
- Nghĩa tiếng Anh: advancements, progress, or changes that have great importance
- Dịch nghĩa: sự phát triển đáng kể
- Ví dụ: The updated map of the city shows considerable developments, including the addition of new roads, landmarks, and public transportation routes. (Bản đồ cập nhật của thành phố cho thấy những bước phát triển đáng kể, bao gồm việc bổ sung các con đường, địa danh và tuyến giao thông công cộng mới.)
3. Midway
- Loại từ: trạng từ
- Nghĩa tiếng Anh: half the distance between two places
- Dịch nghĩa: nằm giữa một đoạn đường
- Ví dụ: The amusement park is located midway between the two cities (Công viên giải trí nằm giữa hai thành phố.)
4. At the intersection of
- Loại từ:
- at: giới từ
- the: mạo từ
- intersection: danh từ
- of: giới từ
- Nghĩa tiếng Anh: at the place where two or more roads join or cross each other
- Dịch nghĩa: tại giao lộ (điểm giao nhau của hai con đường)
- Ví dụ: At the intersection of Main Street and Elm Street, there was heavy traffic congestion due to a road closure for construction work. (Tại giao lộ Main Street và Elm Street, giao thông ùn tắc nặng do đường bị đóng để thi công.)
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Bài mẫu band 5.5+
The given maps illustrate Hunderson area now and the futute development of the construction.
Overall, it is clear that in a proposed plan everything remained unchanged such as the town centre, railway, gas station and a roundabout on the west side, except the two things: air field and a new roundabout. There are new roads which connect all locations together.
Firstly, at present, there is an only road which connects centre and air place. Although, near the town located area which is called build-up ring road. As it seems, there is only 2 roads.
Secondly, it is obvious that circle shaped road which is connects all facilities with each other, constructed in the middle of the railway. In addition, previous air filled turned into ring road, whereas remained amenities still unchanged.
Bài mẫu band 6.5+
The two maps illustrate the present form and the changes, which will be implemented in the future in Hunderstone town.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is clear that in the future will be constructed new road A4, meanwhile, some buildings will not experience any changes.
Firstly, in the proposed plan will be new circular road in the middle of railway. Moreover, airfield is going to be reconstructed to the industrial estate and will be connected to the railway. However, the roundabout in the middle of A2 road will not witness any differences.
Look at the maps for more detail, it is clear that in future will be established new road A4, which will connect the A2 road, railway and town centre. In addition, the gas station and town centre will be in the same place and will not see any changes. Whereas, the build-up area ring road will be reduced in size.
Bài mẫu band 7.0+
The maps illustrate a number of proposed changes that are to take place in the town of Hunderstone.
In general, while the area to the east of the railway will remain almost the same, the western side is going to undergo several significant changes, especially with regards to the transport infrastructure.
As can be seen in the first map, Hunderstone Town is currently divided into two main areas by a railway line, which runs from north to south and passes by a gas station. To the west of the railway, there is an air field which is connected to the main road (A1). A roundabout in the middle of this road connects the A1 road to the east of the town, and in particular, to the ring road around the town centre.
In the future, the airfield in the north west of Hunderstone Town is expected to be replaced by an industrial estate. A new railway line will also be constructed to provide further access to this area. In addition, a new, larger roundabout will be constructed midway along the road connecting the east and west of the town. A new road (A4) which will connect the A1 to the town centre will also be built in the south of the town.
Bài mẫu band 8.0+
The map delineates various features surrounding the current layout of a town and its plausible modifications based on a renovating scheme. Overall, the city has been rendered significantly more accessible and industrial due to the new construction of many side roads, while the reverse is true for its stable general structure throughout the reported period.
Regarding the side of the town showcasing the most notable changes, the right-hand side is projected to record the demolishment of the airfield, thus making way for a novel industrial estate. Furthermore, the interconnection of this location to the second way of transportation ( railway ) will also be upgraded by an additional road for better mobility, unlike the present state of this given spot, which only connects to A2 ( a major road ). Remarkably, there will be a minor adjustment in the roundabout on the A2 Road, specifically slightly moving to the south and facilitating for its access to another roundabout, which will be erected soon and simultaneously interrupt the railway at around the heart of the city. Following this momentum of refurbishing the region, a new main road will also be constructed at the rear of the area in order to enhance the circulation of vehicles on the A2 and minimize unwanted congestion. Interestingly, the one of the facilities to uphold in spite of the upcoming renovating proposal will be the gas station due to its hold of profound significance.
Turning to the left side, it is apparently clear that no considerable alternations will be seen, as the only evident change will be the enlargement of the A4 Road, hence rising the accessibility of the mentioned road for an amenity here, which is the town center. In addition, owing to the necessity for further convenience to commute, the aim of establishing an avenue to the top of the town has also been settled down. Finally, the Ring Road and the build-up area lining it will be unaltered.
Bài mẫu band 9.0+
The maps illustrate the current layout of Hunderstone town and a proposed plan for its future development. Overall, the proposal focuses on enhancing the town's infrastructure by introducing an industrial estate, expanding the roundabout, and constructing a new highway.
At present, the town center is situated in the southeast, encircled by a built-up area and a ring road. The A2, the main north-south access road, intersects with a roundabout near the western edge of the town. To the west of the roundabout, a gas station is located, while the northern part of the town is occupied by an airfield. Additionally, a railway runs parallel to the A2, cutting through the built-up area and passing close to the town center.
Under the proposed plan, the airfield will be replaced by an industrial estate in the northern part of the town. The existing roundabout will be expanded, and a new highway, the A4, will be constructed to provide improved access to the southeast and connect directly to the ring road near the town center. The gas station will remain in its current location, and the railway will also remain unchanged. However, the road network around the town will be significantly upgraded, offering better connectivity and smoother traffic flow.
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