Topic: Process (how alumini cans recycled) | Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1

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Topic: Process (how alumini cans recycled) | Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1

Phân tích biểu đồ

Dạng biểu đồ: biểu đồ quy trình

Đặc điểm tổng quan: 

  • Có 5 bước chính trong quá trình tái chế vỏ lon đã qua sử dụng thành vỏ lon mới

Sắp xếp thông tin:

Miêu tả số liệu của 3 bước đầu vào cùng một đoạn và số liệu của 2 bước sau vào đoạn còn lại.

Đoạn 1 - 3 bước đầu

  • Các vỏ lon đã qua sử dụng được thu gom cho quá trình tái chế
  • Tại khu xử lí, vỏ lon được làm sạch, phân loại, cắt vụn và nén lại
  • Các vỏ lon đã qua xử lí được làm nóng chảy thành dung dịch

Đoạn 2 - 2 bước cuối

  • Dung dịch nhôm sau đó được cán mỏng, tạo thành từng cuộn với độ dày từ 2.5 đến 6mm
  • Cuộn nhôm được tái chế thành những vỏ lon mới và được tái sử dụng lần nữa, chiếm khoảng 74% tổng số lượng vỏ lon ở Anh

Bài mẫu Tham khảo

Bài mẫu 1

The given diagram illustrates the process of aluminium cans recycling.

Overall, the aluminium cans recycling process includes five key stages, beginning with the gathering of discarded cans and ending with newly recycled products.

In the first stage, used cans are collected from various sources in preparation for the recycling procedure. Once the cans are gathered, they are then transported to a processing facility where they undergo cleaning, sorting, shredding, and compressing into small portions. Following that, these processed cans are then heated to extremely high temperatures and melted to form liquid aluminium, preparing them for the following phases.

After being heated, the aluminium is solidified and flattened into individual rolls that range in thickness from 2.5 to 6 mm. In the last stage, these rolls are then utilised to produce new aluminium cans, which are finally distributed back for reuse. It is noteworthy that recycled cans

Bài mẫu band 5.0+

The given diagram explain the process of recycling cans through three stages  starts from collecting cans and ending up with new made drinking cans.

Overall, it can be seen that the moulding used cans to new ones has three process stages, but there is one more different modification in the aluminium plant and it aslo have extra three platforms in can moulding procedure

 The whole experiment starts with collecting cans from collection centre in which cans reached at there destination recycling centre via big truck. Moving forward to next step aluminium recycling plant where few more steps been taken to make new cans.

In recycling plant stage collected cans melt down with high temperature and new aluminium been created. After this, the aluminium pressed with heavy pressure to make thin layer roll for cans. Through this whole operation new cans get

Bài mẫu band 5.5+

The processing diagram illustrates the process of recycling aluminium drinks cans.

Overall, the process of recycling aluminium drinks cans includes 6 steps that started at from the recycling centre and ended at the drinks machine.

The process begins at the collection centre, where used and old aluminium cans are gathered from the consumers. Then these cans are transported to the recycling centre where they are prepared to be sorted for  future recycling. The next step is that cans are sent to an aluminium recycling plant.

In this centre, old aluminum cans are melted down and prepared to turn into the new aluminium. After that, new aluminium is rolled to become the aluminium sheets and then these sheets are used to make the new cans. The final step is the new aluminium cans, which are transported to the factories and then to the shops/drinking machines  and are ready to be sold. Now the customers can enjoy the product.

 account for 74% of the total amount of aluminium cans in the UK.

Bài mẫu band 6.0+

The diagram presents the process involved in the reclaiming aluminium drinks cans.

Overall,the process consists of 7 stages,beginning with a collection centre and middle of the process shows aluminium recycling plant and ending up with drinks machine.

First of all, used aluminiumcansare collected and sorted at the collection centre and divided into two boxes .After that two boxes which is sorted delivered at recycling centre to for further reprocessing .In the next stage we can see aluminium recycling plant which is first melt down old aluminiumas a result come out new aluminium.

Subsequently new aluminium turn into a largealuminiumroll.Next from a roll of aliminium come in sight a lot of new cans.Finally new cans are send to drinks machine where they are filled and distributedto ready for using again.it is then recycledutilized cans,and the cycle starts again.

Bài mẫu band 6.5+

The flow chart illustrates the process of how the aluminium drink cans are recycled.

At the beginning of the process, the new cans are placed into the drink machines, and when they are purchased and used, they will be thrown into the collection centres. In the next stage, the cans will be delivered to recycling centres which are also called aluminium recycling plants by trucks.

Subsequently, those used cans will be melted down into liquid. Afterwards, the new aluminium is formed, then they will be condensed and become aluminium rolls. Next, the new aluminium drink cans are made from those aluminium rolls. In the first step, the new drink cans are put into the drink machine, starting a new cycle.

In summary, the process consists of four main stages, from the introduction of cans to the phase in recycling plants. During the process of the aluminium in recycling plants, there are another four detailed stages showing how the new cans were recycled and produced.

Bài mẫu band 7.0+

The provided diagram illustrates the process of how recycling aluminium beverage cans.

In general, that is a largely mechanical process that includes three main stages, beginning with collecting cans from bins and ending with supplying products for vending machines

Having looked at the given chart for more details, first of all, wasted cans which are thrown by residents are collected from the bins and put into boxes loaded onto trucks. Secondly, these trucks will deliver the wasted cans to recycled factories or firms where the cans will be compressed into blocks.

Next, the process continues with these blocks experiencing a recycling plant. Firstly, old aluminium is melted down and transferred into new aluminium. Then, aluminium sheets are flattened and rolled into new cans. After that, these recycled cans will be transported to the drinks machine. Finally, inhabitants buy the aluminium beverage cans from the wedding machines and the process starts again.

Phân tích từ vựng:

  • includes five key stages: bao gồm 5 bước chính
  • beginning with: bắt đầu bằng
  • ending with: kết thúc với
  • Once the cans are gathered: sau khi các vỏ lon được thu gom
  • Following that: theo sau đó
  • distributed back for reuse: được phân phối lại để tái sử dụng
  • account for 74% of the total amount: chiếm 74% tổng số lượng

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