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Animals | Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2
Từ vựng về Animals
| endangered species | a type of animal or plant that might stop existing because there are only a few of that type alive |
| The lizards are classed as an endangered species. | |
| teeter on the brink/edge of sth | If something is teetering on the brink/edge of a bad situation, it is likely that the situation will happen soon |
| The country teetered on the brink of war. | |
| biodiversity | the number and types of plants and animals that exist in a particular area or in the world generally, or the problem of protecting this |
| a new National Biological Survey to protect species habitat and biodiversity | |
| shrinking | becoming smaller or less |
| The shrinking workforce would have to support a growing number of retired people. | |
| green credentials | the qualities that show you believe it is important to protect the natural environment |
| They are cutting down on air travel in an effort to improve their green credentials. | |
| sustainable | causing little or no damage to the environment and therefore able to continue for a long time |
| A large international meeting was held with the aim of promoting sustainable development in all countries. | |
| blood sports | any sport that involves animals being killed or hurt to make the people watching or taking part feel excitement |
| Hare coursing is the last legal spectator blood sport—rather than a spectator sport—in this country. | |
| poach | to catch and kill animals without permission on someone else's land |
| The farmer claimed that he shot the men because they were poaching on his land. | |
| vivisection | the use of living animals in tests that are intended to increase human knowledge of human diseases and the effects of using particular drugs |
| Animals 'give' their lives in vivisection and the food industry. | |
| mitigate | to make something less harmful, unpleasant, or bad |
| It is unclear how to mitigate the effects of tourism on the island. | |
| encroach on | to gradually take away someone else's rights, or to take control of someone's time, work, etc. |
| What the company is proposing encroaches on the rights of individuals | |
| pose | to cause something, especially a problem or difficulty |
| Nuclear weapons pose a threat to everyone | |
| in captivity | the situation in which a person or animal is kept somewhere and is not allowed to leave |
| Animals bred in captivity would probably not survive if they were released into the wild. | |
| barbaric | extremely cruel and unpleasant |
| She found the idea of killing animals for pleasure barbaric. | |
| instrumental | If someone or something is instrumental in a process, plan, or system, that person or thing is one of the most important influences in causing it to happen |
| She was instrumental in bringing about the prison reform act. | |
| abolish | to end an activity or custom officially |
| I think bullfighting should be abolished |
Bài mẫu
IELTS Essays - Model Answer
Zoos remain popular places for people to visit for entertainment and to learn about wild animals. Although some people are of the opinion that zoos can provide a sanctuary for endangered animals and so should be kept open, I believe that the cruelty that animals suffer outweighs this benefit, and that they should be shut down.
These days, animals are under threat from humans in many ways, seen for example in the way that their habitats are being destroyed through the cutting down of rain forests, or through poaching. Following on from this, the argument is that zoos can protect some of these animals that are under threat. The reason is that they are in a safe environment managed by trained staff who can ensure the animals are looked after and can produce offspring. There are examples of successes in this respect, such as with Pandas, which have been endangered for many years but have been protected.
However, there are more convincing arguments for why zoos should be shut down. Firstly, even though some species are under threat, there are lots of animals which do not fall into this category and who are there just for the entertainment of visitors. While it may be fun and educational to see them, animals are not meant to be caged, and their distress can often be seen in the way many of them pace back and forwards all day. Not only this, if the prime reason of zoos is to protect animals, this could be done in other environments such as wild life parks where the animals have more freedom.
In conclusion, animals should be protected but this does not have to be in zoos. Zoos are cruel to animals, not similar enough to their natural habitat, and they should be closed down.
Nhận xét
Bài essay về sở thú này sẽ nhận được điểm cao cho task response vì nó trả lời đầy đủ câu hỏi bằng cách thảo luận cả hai ý kiến và đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân. Ý tưởng cũng được giải thích tốt, mở rộng và hỗ trợ.
Nó sẽ nhận được một số điểm tốt cho coherence and cohesion vì nó được tổ chức mạch lạc và hợp lý và rất dễ theo dõi. Giới thiệu giới thiệu chủ đề sau đó một luận điểm chủ đề đã được đưa ra rõ ràng và được nhấn mạnh.
Một đoạn thân bài thảo luận về một mặt của tranh luận, và mặt kia được thảo luận tới ở đoạn thứ hai. Đoạn thân thứ hai cũng là ý kiến của người viết, và điều này được tóm tắt lại trong phần kết luận.
Có một số từ vựng và cụm từ thú vị đã được sử dụng. Ví dụ:
- sanctuary for endangered animals
- under threat from humans
- habitats are being destroyed
- poaching
- produce offspring
- successes in this respect
- not meant to be caged
- natural habitat
Ngoài ra còn có một số cấu trúc ngữ pháp phức tạp được sử dụng tốt và ngữ pháp là chính xác. Ví dụ như:
- Although some people are of the opinion that zoos can provide a sanctuary for endangered animals...
- ...seen for example in the way that their habitats are being destroyed...
- ...the argument is that zoos can protect some of these animals who are under threat.
- ...trained staff who can ensure the animals are looked after...
- Pandas who have been endangered...
- ...even though some species are under threat...
- ...While it may be fun and educational...
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