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Năm 1995: 

  • Cities: nearly half of the Australian-born citizens lived // 15% lower than the figure for their foreign counterparts 
  • Rural areas: ranked second in both charts // 30% of local and 40% of overseas inhabitants
  • Urban areas: only about 10% of non-Australian nationals // native Australians was double the former 

Năm 2010:

  • Cities: both local and foreign inhabitants living in cities remain dominante in the chart // around 66% of native Australians // 80% of their foreign counterparts
  • Rural areas: underwent the most dramatic drops // became the least popular // 17% of native Australians // 5% of foreign residents
  • Urban areas: less remarkable decline // both below 20%

Bố cục bài viết 

Introduction (paraphrase đề bài) & Overview (nêu xu hướng chính & những đặc điểm nổi bật – main features của bài):

  • (overview for trend) có sự thay đổi đáng kể đối với tỷ lệ dân số thành thị giữa cả hai nhóm
  • (overview for comparison) tỷ lệ người sống ở đô thị luôn chiếm phần lớn ở cả hai năm

Body paragraph 01 (tỷ lệ của năm 1995)

Body paragraph 02 (tỷ lệ của năm 2010)

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The graph illustrates alterations in the population of Australian-born and non-Australian-born people who reside in cities, towns and urban areas from 1995 to 2010.

Overall, the percentage of individuals who reside in urban areas increased dramatically. On the contrary, more and more people choose to live outside the rural areas during a given time period.

In 1995, the percentage of people who were born in Australia and lived in the cities was about 50% and that number rose to 65% in 2010. The data for the non-Australian population moved up 20%, from 60% in 1995 to 80% 15 years later. Compared with figures for rural residents both Australians and non-Australians plummeted sharply, where numbers decreased from 30% to 15% for Australian and from 40% to nearly 5% for foreigners.

On the other hand, the number of people born in villages has decreased by at least 5% in all categories at the given time period. Even though, this change is relatively tiny when it is compared to the decline of percentage of birth in rural areas. The birth rate of rural area in people born in Australia and outside Australia fallen from 30 and 40 % to 15 and 5% respectively which was the noteworthy alteration among the other statistics.

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The graph illustrates alterations in the population of Australian-born and non-Australian-born people who reside in cities, towns and urban areas from 1995 to 2010.

Overall, the percentage of individuals who reside in urban areas increased dramatically. On the contrary, more and more people choose to live outside the rural areas during a given time period.

In 1995, the percentage of people who were born in Australia and lived in the cities was about 50% and that number rose to 65% in 2010. The data for the non-Australian population moved up 20%, from 60% in 1995 to 80% 15 years later. Compared with figures for rural residents both Australians and non-Australians plummeted sharply, where numbers decreased from 30% to 15% for Australian and from 40% to nearly 5% for foreigners

On the other hand, the number of people born in villages has decreased by at least 5% in all categories at the given time period. Even though, this change is relatively tiny when it is compared to the decline of percentage of birth in rural areas. The birth rate of rural area in people born in Australia and outside Australia fallen from 30 and 40 % to 15 and 5% respectively which was the noteworthy alteration among the other statistics.

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The given bar chart depicts the living area of Australian and non-Australian from 1995 to 2010. Overall, there was significant shift towards urban living amonth both groups, as opposed to a dramatic decline in rural populations, with those living metropolitans dominating the chart in both years. 

Regarding 1995 residential preferences, nearly half of the Australian-born citizens lived in cities, which was approximately 15% lower than the figure for their foreign counterparts. Rural areas ranked second in both charts, with 30% and 40% of local and overseas inhabitants, respectively. Only about 10% of the non-Australian nationals preferred to stay within urban areas, while the corresponding figure for native Australians was double the former in the same year. 

In terms of 2010 tendency, both local and foreign inhabitants living in cities remain dominante in the chart, after substaintial rises to around 66% of native Australians and 80% of their foreign counterparts. In contrast, the rural population underwent the most dramatic drops in 2010 when rural regions became the least popular, at about 17% of native Australians and 5% of foreign residents. A less remarkable decline was seen in the percentage of Australian and non-Australian citizens opting for towns, to below 20% in 2010, at about 17% and 10% in order. 

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The graph illustrates alterations in the population of Australian-born and non-Australian-born people who reside in cities, towns and urban areas from 1995 to 2010.

Overall, the percentage of individuals who reside in urban areas increased dramatically. On the contrary, more and more people choose to live outside the rural areas during a given time period.

In 1995, the percentage of people who were born in Australia and lived in the cities was about 50% and that number rose to 65% in 2010. The data for the non-Australian population moved up 20%, from 60% in 1995 to 80% 15 years later. Compared with figures for rural residents both Australians and non-Australians plummeted sharply, where numbers decreased from 30% to 15% for Australian and from 40% to nearly 5% for foreigners

On the other hand, the number of people born in villages has decreased by at least 5% in all categories at the given time period. Even though, this change is relatively tiny when it is compared to the decline of percentage of birth in rural areas. The birth rate of rural area in people born in Australia and outside Australia fallen from 30 and 40 % to 15 and 5% respectively which was the noteworthy alteration among the other statistics.

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The bar chart illustrates shifts in the percentage of individuals born in Australia and those born outside Australia residing in urban, rural, and town areas from 1995 to 2010.

In 1995, the majority of Australian-born individuals lived in urban areas, constituting approximately 70%, while rural and town areas hosted around 15% each. Over the next 15 years, the urban population continued to grow steadily, reaching nearly 80% by 2010. Conversely, the percentage of Australians born in rural and town regions experienced a decline, settling around 10% and 5%, respectively.

For those born outside Australia, the urban setting also attracted the highest percentage in 1995, at approximately 60%. However, by 2010, this proportion soared to nearly 75%. Rural and town residency for foreign-born individuals saw a decrease, with rural areas dropping from about 20% to 15%, and town areas declining from roughly 15% to 10%.

In summary, the two main trends observed are the overall urbanization and the increasing urban dominance for both Australian-born and foreign-born populations during the 15-year period. Rural and town areas, conversely, experienced a noticeable decline in their share of residents.

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