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The maps below show the layouts of the Nature Museum between 2010 and 2015 -  Đề Thi Thật IELTS Writing Task 1&2 29/10/2022

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The maps below show the layouts of the Nature Museum between 2010 and 2015 -  Đề Thi Thật IELTS Writing Task 1&2 Ngày 29/10/2022

CHỮA ĐỀ IELTS WRITING TASK 1 NGÀY 29/10

1. Phân tích đề bài

-Đề bài: The maps below show the layouts of the Nature Museum between 2010 and 2015

-Dạng câu hỏi: map

-Gợi ý dàn bài chi tiết:

  • Introduction: paraphrase đề bài
  • Overview: chỉ ra những thay đổi nổi bật nhất, cụ thể ở đây là diện tích bảo tàng tăng với những phòng trưng bày và cơ sở vật chất mới thay thế cho khu vực cây xanh.
  • Body 1: miêu tả bảo tàng vào năm 2010  
  • Khu vực lobby ở trung tâm -> phía trên là ocean hall và mammals -> bên trái là khu vực dinosaurs -> bên ngoài bên phải là khu vực cây xanh 
  •  Body 2: miêu tả bảo tàng vào năm 2015
  • Khu vực lobby và dinosaurs giữ nguyên -> khu vực mammal được chuyển thành ice age và insect -> khu vực cây xanh chuyển thành khu mammals, human, shops và cafe. 

2. Bài mẫu

The illustrations depict changes to the Nature Museum and its grounds over a 5-year period starting in 2010.

In general, the museum’s square footage was increased with novel exhibition rooms and facilities at the expense of the tree area.

In 2010, the Nature Museum contained a central lobby inside which the main entrance was at the bottom and a table ticket office was to the left of the map. One of the internal doors at the top of the map led to an ocean hall, adjacent to a mammal display on the left. Meanwhile, the other door provided access to an area of different dinosaurs, which was about the same size as the lobby. The grounds of the museum in the right corner were covered by plants.

In the following five years, while the lobby and the dinosaur section remained mostly untouched, the ocean hall was expanded. A transformation was witnessed in the mammal part, for it was converted into an ice age exhibition in the upper left corner and an insect display right next to the exit from the ocean hall. The trees outside were cut down to make way for various rooms: the mammal section, a new human area, some shops, and a cafe.

3. Từ vựng và cấu trúc tham khảo

  • depict (v): mô tả
  • grounds (n): khu vực xung quanh
  • square footage (n): đơn vị bộ vuông (chỉ diện tích)
  • novel (adj): mới
  • at the expense of sth: dẫn tới sự mất đi của cái gì 
  • contain (v): bao gồm
  • adjacent (adj) to sth: gần với cái gì
  • provide (v) access to sth: cho phép tiếp cận với cái gì
  • untouched (adj): không đổi
  • expand (v): mở rộng
  • transformation (n): sự thay đổi
  • convert (v) into sth: biến đổi thành cái gì
  • make (v) way for sth: nhường chỗ cho cái gì

Bài mẫu band 5.0+

The map illustrate below the layout of nature Museum between 2010 and 2013 respectively.

Generally, the Museum had a big change in the layout in years of 2010-2013. the biggest changes was the garden at the far right and was replace other sections.

At the Far Left of the map, in 2011 the mammal section was replaced with Ice age series in 2013 and was moved to the right of the map. To carry on, inn 2013 the insects was the newest collection to the museum it was located below the ice age section. In addition, the Ocean wall on the middle top of the map in 2013 became more bigger than 2011.

at the far right of the map respective for both 2010 and 2013, in 2013 the garden was knock down and cafe and shops was replaced.

Bài mẫu band 6.5+

The two maps show information about the differences in room changes in nature museums over a three-year period. Overall, the museums added some exhibitions and became more extensive.

To begin with, in 2010, on the right side of the museum, there was a garden where you could enjoy the view from the ocean hall. However, there is a dinosaurus and mammals room at the time on the left side

On the other hand, the museum changed in 2013 time. As we can see on the right side, it becomes an ice age room. Before, there was a mammal room. After that, there was a small room called an insect. On the right side, there are three rooms: a shop and, more giant mammals and some human origins display space, and precisely in the corner, there is a cafe room. Moreover, Ocean Hall's ticket desk and entrance room stay the same.

Bài mẫu band 7.0+

The diagrams provide information about the changes in the Nature Museum between 2010 and 2013.

Overall, the nature museum underwent a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which are the disappearance of a garden and the development of some facilities.

The weast of the nature museum saw a number of transformations, with the mammal area being expanded and replaced by the ice age and insects gallery to ensure that it can provide various choices to visitors. Similarly, the ocean hall in the centre was extended in order to contain more people.

In addition, the Dinosaurs and lobby areas in the south of the nature museum are kept in place. Conversely, there used to be a garden in the east of this museum, but it was redeveloped into an area that was used for displaying mammals, human origins and shops and coffee sectors to help parents observe their children meantime chatting with friends.

Bài mẫu band 7.5+

The maps illustrate the changes to a natural museum between 2010 and 2013.

Overall, the museum underwent several changes, with the most noticeable being a major extension to the building, along with several new displays and facilities.

In 2010, the museum housed three main exhibition rooms and a lobby which contained the ticket desk. The dinosaur display was located in the room directly to the left of the lobby area, while the ocean hall was found directly behind the lobby. Meanwhile, the mammal exhibition was located in the room behind the dinosaur display.

By 2013, an extension had been built on the right side of the building, which was previously a garden. The new section of the building contained a new shop and cafe, along with a new display about human origins, and a new mammal display room. The room which previously housed the mammal display was fitted out with a new display on the Ice Age, along with a new room containing an insect display.

Bài mẫu band 8.0+

The maps represent the changes that occurred in Nature Museum from the year 2010 to 2013.

Overall, it is clear that the east area covered with the garden was completely transformed into a variety of shops over the period. However, the space for the Dinosaurs, Lobby and Ticket desk remained the same.

In the year between 2010 and 2013, there was no change in the entrance gate but the area covered by the Ocean Hall expanded to a bit more as compared to the year 2010. Likewise, the new amendmentation of insects and the ice age took place on the west side of the Museum. Also, there was no such place for plants and trees in 2013.

Furthermore, the Human Origins Display was built in the north-west direction which was quite close to the Mammals. In contrast to the year 2013, there was no particular area for the shop and cafe in a south-west direction in 2010.

CHỮA ĐỀ IELTS WRITING TASK 2 NGÀY 29/10

1. Phân tích đề bài

-Đề bài: As well as making money businesses also have a responsibility towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

– Dạng bài: Argumentative / Agree and Disagree 

– Gợi ý dàn bài chi tiết

  • Introduction: nêu vấn đề (các trách nhiệm của doanh nghiệp) + nêu ngắn gọn ý kiến      cá nhân (bên cạnh lợi nhuận, công ty cần có trách nhiệm xã hội)
  • Body 1: sự cần thiết của lợi nhuận  
  • chi trả cho các chi phí sản xuất kinh doanh 
  • đóng góp thuế cho nhà nước
  • Body 2: lý do doanh nghiệp cần có trách nhiệm xã hội 
  • bảo vệ môi trường -> đảm bảo phát triển bền vững -> ví dụ: công ty mỹ phẩm 
  • đảm bảo đời sống người lao động
  • Conclusion: nêu lại ngắn gọn sự cần thiết của lợi nhuận và trách nhiệm xã hội mà các doanh nghiệp cần có

2. Bài mẫu

Opinions diverge on the range of responsibilities that a business is obliged to shoulder. I strongly hold the view that entrepreneurs, besides the top priority of profit maximization, should also bear greater responsibilities towards society as a whole.

There are several driving forces behind a firm’s money-making incentives, one of which is a variety of costs that the firm incurs. For example, a manufacturer has to cover operational costs, direct expenses, and overheads on a regular basis. A weak liquidity position may pose a potential threat of insolvency and bankruptcy to the company. Moreover, healthy financial statements also mean that the firm is making great contributions to the social welfare system through tax payments. This sum could be channeled into various societal improvement projects such as infrastructure, sustainable energy, and new technologies.

In addition to generating handsome profits, enterprises should conduct their businesses in a socially responsible fashion. One of the most critical facets is regarding the environment, as production activities are mainly attributed to environmental degradation. Therefore, it is of the utmost importance for firms, regardless of size and scope, to adhere to environmental regulations and pursue greener working practices in order to stay sustainable in the long run. Some international cosmetics companies, for instance, are improving their product formulation to use water-efficient and non-ecotoxic ingredients, largely contributing to universal efforts for environmental preservation. Additionally, benefits for staff and dependent family members should be assured by business leaders. Tech giants like Google are well-known for their dynamic and dedicated working environments, thereby elevating employees’ job satisfaction and productivity.

In conclusion, even though a strong bottom line can help secure businesses in a competitive market, I firmly hold the belief that it is advisable for them to fulfill social and environmental responsibilities.

3. Từ vựng và cấu trúc tham khảo

  • opinions diverge on sth: có nhiều ý kiến khác nhau về cái gì
  • obliged (adj): có trách nhiệm làm gì
  • shoulder (v) responsibilities = bear (v) responsibilities towards sth: gánh vác trách nhiệm đối với điều gì 
  • hold (v) the view that …: cho rằng …
  • profit maximization (n): tối đa hóa lợi nhuận
  • driving force (n) behind sth: động lực thúc đẩy cho cái gì
  • incentive (n): động lực
  • incur (v) a cost: gánh chịu chi phí
  • cover (v) a cost: chi trả chi phí
  • overhead (n): chi phí gián tiếp
  • liquidity (n): tính thanh khoản
  • pose (v) a potential threat of sth to sth: gây ra mối đe dọa tiềm tàng về cái gì cho ai
  • insolvency (n): tình thế không có khả năng trả nợ
  • bankruptcy (n): phá sản
  • financial statement (n): báo cáo tài chính
  • social welfare (n): phúc lợi xã hội
  • channel (v) sth into sth: chuyển hướng cái gì vào cái gì
  • societal (adj): xã hội
  • handsome profit (n): lợi nhuận cao
  • in a … fashion: theo một cách như thế nào
  • critical (adj): quan trọng
  • facet (n): khía cạnh
  • attribute (v) sth to sth: gán cái gì cho cái gì
  • degradation (n): sự suy thoái
  • adhere (v) to sth: tuân theo cái gì
  • sustainable (adj): bền vững
  • water-efficient (adj): hiệu quả nước
  • non-ecotoxic (adj): không độc hại với môi trường
  • universal (adj): chung 
  • preservation (n): sự bảo tồn
  • dependent family member (n): thành viên gia đình phụ thuộc
  • assure (v): đảm bảo
  • tech giant (n): gã khổng lồ công nghệ
  • job satisfaction (n): sự thỏa mãn trong công việc
  • bottom line (n): kết quả kinh doanh
  • firmly hold (v) the view that…: tin tưởng rằng …
  • fulfill (v): hoàn thành 

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