The process of manufacturing bottled and canned water -Bài mẫu Writing Task 1

The process of manufacturing bottled and canned water - Bài mẫu Writing Task 1

Phân tích đề bài

• Dạng bài: Quy trình (Diagram)
• Đối tượng đề cập: Quy trình sản xuất thức uống có gas
• Thì sử dụng: Hiện tại đơn
• Cấu trúc câu: Câu bị động

Dàn bài

• Mở bài: giới thiệu lại quy trình
• Đoạn tổng quát: đưa ra đặc điểm nổi bật của quy trình đã cho
• Đoạn thân bài 1: Mô tả nửa đầu của quy trình
• Đoạn thân bài 2: Mô tả các bước còn lại của quy trình 

Phân tích chi tiết

Đoạn tổng quát (Overview):

• Có 4 bước chính trong quy trình chế biến, bắt đầu với bước làm sạch nước và kết thúc với việc các thức uống có gas được đưa đi phân phối 

Thân bài 1: Mô tả quá trình từ làm sạch nước cho tới khi hoàn tất quá trình carbonate hoá dung dịch

• Bước 1: Nước được đưa qua máy lọc và chất làm mềm nước cứng hay các hoá chất khác được thêm vào nước.
• Bước 2: Nước được đun nóng sau đó được đưa qua ống làm lạnh; sau đó carbon dioxide được thêm vào tạo ra nước có gas.

Thân bài 2: Mô tả quá trình thêm các chất phụ gia tới khi hoàn thành sản phẩm và được bán tại các siêu thị

• Bước 3: nước có gas được đưa vào vào một bồn chứa để trộn với các chất phụ gia, bao gồm chất tạo màu, chất tạo vị.
• Bước 4: Cuối cùng, nước uống có gas được đóng gói vào chai hoặc lon, và những lon hoặc chai đó được đóng vào các thùng. Các thùng thức uống này sẽ được vận chuyển đến các siêu thị để bán.

Bài mẫu tham khảo

Bài mẫu 1

The diagram shows the stages involved in the production of soft drink.

Overall, there are 5 stages in the process, beginning with preparing the water for the drinks, and culminating with the packaging and delivery of the finished product.

In the first stage of the process, water is put through a filter before a softener and other chemicals are added to it. Once the water has been processed, it is then pumped on to stage 2 where it undergoes evaporation and carbonation. During this stage, the water is heated and runs through a cooling pipe before carbon dioxide is added, creating carbonated water. 

In the third stage of the process, the carbonated water is put into a mixing tank where it is mixed with colouring, flavouring, and sweetener. The resulting mixture is then filtered before being packaged into cans and bottles. Finally, once the bottles and cans have been packaged into boxes, they are transported to supermarkets where they are ready to be sold.

Bài mẫu band 5.0+

The diagram explains the way in which production of  2 different containers of carbonated drinks.   

Overall, there are five stages in the process beginning with the cleaning drink and culminating in delivery. To begin, row water is filtered. This rain is cleaned with some chemicals. Clean drink is going electric heaters through the pump . The heater fluid flows through the cooling pipe. The cooled liquid is poured into the gasifier and gasified with carbon dioxide.    

Following this, this carbonated aqua flows using a long groove for goes big mixing  tank. Ingredients such as flavour, syrup and colour are added in order to give a pleasant aroma, pleasant taste and colour. Then water is mixed using a mixer for a certain time in this tank. In the subsequent stage, the prepared drink is filtered once again. Ready sparkling rain is poured into 2 different containers: bottles and cons using a pouring apparatus. 

Finally, the drinks are packed in a cardboard box and carton boxes are placed on the truck. After that, the products are delivered to the supermarket.

Bài mẫu band 6.0+

The flow chart illustrates the way in which bottled or carbonated drinks.

Overall, there are five stages in the whole carbonated water producing process, beginning with the water cleaning and the end delivery to markets.

At the beginning, the raw water cleans by passing through chemicals. Then it is transferred for heating to help to pump it with electric heating. Then, the heating water is sent to the cooling pipe and carbonated dioxide water. Where carbon dioxide is introduced to create the carbonate affected. After the join carbon dioxide as well as it will be sent mixing stage. That stage starts with mixing coloring and also syrup, the most important thing, which is flavor. Next, they are filtered and then split into two during bottling. Again, prior to bottling and canning. It is fizzy drinks look like Coca-cola The finished drinks are then boxed up and sent to supermarkets for retail.

Bài mẫu band 6.5+

The flow chart gives  data about the process of making bottled and canned carbonated drinks.

Overall, there are five stages in the process of making ready drinks. Begins with cleaning row water and ends with packaging.

To begin with, the water is filtered. Then, filtered water is made softer by the special machine and  some type of chemicals. The next step is, that the water which is mixed with the compound goes through pumps to electric heaters. After that, heated water was blended with carbon dioxide in the special machine. Following this, carbonated water is directed to stage three which is mixing. In this process, carbonated water is varied with three types of product (syrup, flavour and colour).

After filtering, the process of producing drinks comes to the fourth stage (filtering and filling stage). Subsequently, the assorted outcome is separated into bottled drinks and canned drinks. Follow-up, divided liquid refreshments are boxed. In the end, all set dram is delivered to the supermarket.

Bài mẫu band 7.0+

The diagram illustrates the process of how factories make bottles and cans of carbonated beverages.

In general, that is a largely mechanical process including 5 stages, from rainwater intake to transport products to supermarkets.

Having looked at the given picture for more details, the first step, rainwater is filtered with chemicals inside the water softener to make water clean. Then, the pump delivers the water to electric beaters to undergo heating evaporation. Next step, it is transported to an area where the water will undergo a carbonated process through the cooling pipe.

The process continues with delivering the carbonated water into the mixing tank where it will be mixed with different chemicals including colouring, flavours, and syrup. After that, the filter will fill the bottles and cans with the carbonated drinks. Finally, these bottles and cans will be packed in containers and trucks will be delivered items to the supermarkets.

Bài mẫu band 8.0+

The diagram illustrates the way in which canned and bottled carbonated drinks are produced.

Overall, the process consists of five stages, beginning with water cleaning and ending with packaging.

As can be seen, water serves as the main material in the process of producing carbonated drinks. Initially, the water is passed through a filter, and it then flows to a large container where water softeners and chemicals are added to it. In the subsequent stage, the liquid is pumped to an Electric heater where it undergoes heat treatment. Prior to the heated water being placed into a large container the water is cooled by a cooling pipe. In this ,section carbon dioxide is added to it. In the next step,  the carbonated water is put into a mixing tank where colour, Syrup and flavour are added to it and they are completely mixed together by a stirrer. In the filtering and filling stage, the drink is passed a filter before it is put in bottles and cans.At the final stage, prior to bottles and cans being delivered to supermarkets for  consumption, they are packaged into boxes.

Các từ vựng cần lưu ý

• a filter: máy lọc nước
• a softener: chất làm mềm nước cứng
• evaporation: quá trình bay hơi 
• carbonation: quá trình carbonate hoá dung dịch (thêm carbon dioxide vào chất lỏng)
• resulting mixture: hỗn hợp được tạo ra

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