The bar chart shows the percentage of small, medium, large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016 | Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1
Phân tích yêu cầu
- Dạng bài: Biểu đồ cột (Bar chart).
- Đối tượng đề cập: tỉ lệ sử dụng mạng xã hội của các công ty lớn, vừa và nhỏ trong 5 năm, bắt đầu từ 2012.
- Thì sử dụng: quá khứ đơn.
Phân tích chi tiết
Đoạn tổng quát
- Tỉ lệ dùng mạng xã hội tăng trong thời kỳ 2012-2016.
- Công ty lớn dùng nhiều mạng xã hội nhất trong các năm, và trong cả ba loại công ty.
Thân bài 1
- Số phần trăm công ty nhỏ tăng nhẹ trong ba năm đầu.
- Số phần trăm công ty vừa tăng mạnh trong ba năm đầu.
- Cả hai loại công ty đều giảm vào năm 2015, rồi tăng lên cùng mức vào năm 2016.
Thân bài 2
- 80% các công ty lớn sử dụng mạng xã hội.
- Con số này không thay đổi trong cả 5 năm, chỉ trừ trong năm 2015.
Bài mẫu tham khảo
Bài mẫu band 5.5+
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of small, medium and large companies that maintained a presence on social media in a four year period starting from 2012.
Overall, the proportion of companies using social media increased over the given period, regardless of their size. Additionally, large companies are the most active and most consistent users of social media throughout the period.
Among small and medium businesses, the period stretching from 2012 to 2014 saw an increase in social media usage. The figures for smaller companies began at just under 30 percent in 2012, then steadily increased to reach 35 percent two years later. The change is even more pronounced in medium-sized businesses, which began 2012 with around 35%, and ended next two years with a 20% increase in social media use. After both types of businesses suffered a significant drop in 2015 to around 30%, this rising trend would then resume in the very final year, resulting in the recovery to around 50% in 2016 for both.
In contrast, large companies make extensive use of social media, with figures almost always standing at just under 80% from 2012 to 2016. The sole exception to this was 2015, where the media participation rate fell by nearly a third to a record low of just over 50 percent.
Bài mẫu band 6.5+
The bar chart highlights data about the proportion of businesses of different sizes who acknowledged social media presence during a 4-year period starting from 2012.
Overall, although there were still inconsistencies in the use of social platforms among businesses, it still recorded a striking increase regardless of business sizes over the years. Another interesting point is that the larger the business was, the more frequently they maintained on social media.
Small businesses and medium-sized businesses appeared to follow the same patterns with a remarkable climb in the first 3 years starting from 28% for the former and just above 30% for the latter. These figures then witnessed a 7% and a substantial 18% increase respectively in 2014 before plummeting to 30% one year later for both small and medium businesses. However, both types of business saw a recovery in their percentages of social media presence, finishing at almost 50% for small ones and around 52% for medium-sized ones.
Large businesses, by contrast, showed negligible changes except for a sharp dip to around 53% in 2015. The percentage of large businesses with social media presence fluctuated between 78% and 79% in the years of 2012, 2013, 2014 and 2016.
Bài mẫu band 7.0+
The bar chart depicts the social media presence of small, medium, and large businesses in the UK between 2012 and 2016.
Overall, it is apparent that figures for every kind of business increased regardless of a common throughout and a significant pullback in 2015. Large trade increased the least yet had a lot more, the biggest presence each year.
To begin with small businesses, about 30% (the lowest data point on the chart) had a social media presence in 2012 and 2013. This number then rose to 35% by 2014, then fell to 30%, and the final rise at the end of the study period was less than 50%. The trend for medium-sized trade was similar, starting at 31%, rising significantly to about 50% in 2013 and 2014, dropping to 30% again in 2015, and growing to 52% in 2016.
Furthermore, The proportions for large businesses were more than double for small and medium enterprises at to beginning of the period (78%). This figure stagnated until 2015, when it fell to its lowest point of 51%, preceding a final recovery(coming back to its previous number) to 79% in 2016.
Bài mẫu band 7.5+
The bar chart depicts the social media presence of small, medium, and large businesses in the UK between 2012 and 2016.
Overall, it is apparent that figures for every kind of business increased regardless of a common throughout and a significant pullback in 2015. Large trade increased the least yet had a lot more, the biggest presence each year.
To begin with small businesses, about 30% (the lowest data point on the chart) had a social media presence in 2012 and 2013. This number then rose to 35% by 2014, then fell to 30%, and the final rise at the end of the study period was less than 50%. The trend for medium-sized trade was similar, starting at 31%, rising significantly to about 50% in 2013 and 2014, dropping to 30% again in 2015, and growing to 52% in 2016.
Furthermore, The proportions for large businesses were more than double for small and medium enterprises at to beginning of the period (78%). This figure stagnated until 2015, when it fell to its lowest point of 51%, preceding a final recovery(coming back to its previous number) to 79% in 2016.
Bài mẫu band 8.5+
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of using social media for business purposes from 2012 to 2016 in three types of companies.
Overall. All three types of businesses saw media presence grow quickly peaking in 2016. Corporations were significantly more likely to use social media sites throughout.
During the first three years, the percentage of large companies using social media dropped minimally, staying below 80%. Meanwhile, the use of social networking sites among small businesses rose slightly, increasing from 28% to 35%. However, drastic growth was seen in medium-sized ones rose faster, from just over 30% to almost 50%
Notably, 2015 witnessed a slow decline to 30% of small-sized companies while there was a dramatic downward trend in 30% and 53% respectively, of medium- and large-sized ones in using social media. After that, all three sizes of businesses also hit a peak at approximately 50%, over 50% and 80%, respectively, in 2016.
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