Topic: School in 1985 and now | Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1
Đề bài IELTS Writing Task 1 School in 1985 and now
Đề bài: The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Gợi ý giải đề và dàn ý IELTS Writing Task 1 School in 1985 and now
1. Gợi ý giải đề
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2. Dàn ý chi tiết
Dàn ý chi tiết đề bài IELTS Writing Task 1 School in 1985 and now |
Paragraph 1
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- Introduction
- Overview: Overview of the given diagrams comparing the school’s layout in 1985 with its present-day layout: the purpose of the changes to accommodate the growing student population over three decades
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Paragraph 2: Description of the 1985 Layout
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- Entrance and exit locations in the north, on either side of a rectangular car park
- Substantial playing field occupying the southern area
- Road running along the perimeter of the car park, connecting the entry and exit
- Office situated in the northwest, with a library extending into the play area
- Smaller car park and classrooms on the east of the office and library
- Two-storey classroom block located towards the east of the road
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Paragraph 3: Present-Day Layout
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- Replacement of the rectangular car park with a bigger, semi-circular car park
- Removal of the road connecting the car park to the playing fields and the smaller car park
- Unchanged entrance, exit, and office locations
- Introduction of a learning resource center and a computer room, replacing the old library
- Reduction of the playing field area to accommodate a pool and fitness center
- Addition of another story to the two-story classroom block
- Planting of trees in the place of the road
- Construction of additional classrooms to the south of the three-story classroom block
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Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 School in 1985 and now
The given diagrams compare the layout of a school in 1985 with its present-day one. Overall, the school has undergone many changes to accommodate the growing number of students over the given period of three decades.
After more than 30 years, the student population has grown from 1500 to 2300. In 1985, the entrance and exit were in the north, on the two sides of a rectangular car park. There was a playing field occupying a substantial area in the south, and a road running along the periphery of the car park connecting the entry and the exit. This road extended along the center to the playing area. An office was in the northwest of the road. To the south of the office, there was a library, which extended into the play area. Another smaller car park and some classrooms were there on the east of the office and library. A two-story classroom block was located towards the east of the road.
In the present layout, the rectangular car park has been replaced by a bigger, semi-circular car park. The road connecting the car park to the playing fields, and the smaller car park have been removed, while the entrance, exit, and office have remained unchanged. A learning resource center and a computer room have taken the place of the old library. The area of the playing fields has been cut down to make room for a pool and fitness center. Another story has been added to the two-story classroom block with some trees planted in the place of the road. Some more classrooms have been constructed to the south of the three-story classroom block.
Một số từ vựng ăn điểm trong bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 School in 1985 and now:
- Layout (n): sắp đặt
- Accommodate (v): chứa/đựng
- Rectangular (adj): hình vuông/tứ giác
- Substantial (adj): đáng kể
- Extend (v): kéo dài
- Periphery (n): chu vi
- Semi-circular (adj): bán nguyệt
- Remove (v): loại bỏ
- Construct (v): xây dựng
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