Bài mẫu + Từ vựng đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 14.01.2023

Bài mẫu + Từ vựng đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 14.01.2023

Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1

Đề thi: The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001. Summarize the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Dàn bài

Introduction: Giới thiệu nội dung biểu đồ bằng cách paraphrase đề bài.

• The graph below → The graph (bỏ below).
• shows → depicts.
• the percentage of workers → the proportion of workers.
• from five different European countries → from five European nations.
• that were absent for a day or more due to illness → who took sick leave for a day or more.
• from 1991 to 2001 → between 1991 and 2001.

Overview: Nêu những đặc điểm tổng quát và nổi bật nhất của biểu đồ (không nêu số liệu cụ thể).

• Netherlands: highest percentage, fluctuations.
• France and Sweden: opposite trends, France going down, Sweden going up. 
• UK and Germany: same pattern, UK’s figure higher.

Body: Mô tả chi tiết sự thay đổi số liệu của từng quốc gia, với các mốc thời gian và con số cụ thể.

Sample Answer band 7.0+

The graph depicts the proportion of workers from five European nations who took sick leave for a day or more between 1991 and 2001.

Overall, it is obvious that the Netherlands almost always accounted for the highest percentage, despite fluctuations. France and Sweden showed opposite trends, with a slide for the former and a climb for the latter. Only the UK and Germany shared the same pattern, even though the UK’s figure was noticeably higher.

Specifically, the Netherlands led in the percentage of employees who missed work due to illness, fluctuating between 4% (in 1996) and approximately 5.75% (in 1992 and 2001). During that time, France saw a steady decline, hitting its lowest point of 3% in 1999 and remaining there until the end of the period. In contrast, the proportion of workers with sickness absence in Sweden significantly increased by 1.75%, peaking at 4.75% in 2001. The two remaining countries, the UK and Germany, witnessed little variation as their figures stabilized, respectively, at about 3.75% and around 1.5%.

Một số từ vựng

• Depict [v] = show/describe [v]
• Sick leave [n, uncountable]: the period of time spent away from work because of illness

→ Take sick leave.

• The Netherlands, the UK → tên hai quốc gia này phải có the phía trước.
• Show opposite trends [v]: thể hiện hai xu hướng trái ngược.
• Share the same pattern [v]: có cùng mô hình.
• Specifically [adv]: used when you want to add more detailed and exact information
• Lead (in something) [v]: to be the best at something; to be in first place
• Steady [adj]: developing, growing, etc. gradually and in an even and regular way
• In contrast [adv]: used to show a difference between two or more people or things
• Sickness absence [n]: the fact that someone takes time off from work because of illness
• Variation [n]: a change, especially in the amount or level of something

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